《凡人修仙傳》評論
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外網(wǎng)武俠世界(wuxiaworld)對《凡人修仙傳》的評論
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I'll just say it straight away. RMJI is a novel for people sick of harems, rape, pointlessly arrogant young masters, constant lame face slapping, and overly talented main characters who are naturally gifted with the highest possible talent and/or an absolutely overpowered cheat item and/or introduced right away to a teacher that guides them through the most optimal cultivation path possible.
The main character is not a hero filled with a passion for all that is good, nor are they an edgy anti hero that people love because they go around breaking laws at first glance just because they can.
Han Li was simply a mortal given a chance to cultivate, and by doing so he is given "his own path to immortality"…
我就直說吧?!斗踩诵尴蓚鳌肥且徊繉槟切┯憛捄髮m、強奸、無謂傲慢的少爺、不斷的蹩腳的打臉、以及天賦過人的主角,要么天生就擁有最高的天賦和/或絕對壓倒一切的作弊手段,或是馬上被介紹給老師,指導(dǎo)他們通過最理想的培養(yǎng)途徑的人寫的小說。
主人公不是一個對一切美好事物充滿激情的英雄,也不是一個人們喜歡的刺頭反英雄,因為他們經(jīng)常在一開始就打破規(guī)則,僅僅是因為他們可以。
韓立只是一個凡人,給了他一個修行的機會,就這樣他開啟了“自己的修仙之路”…
Best novel of WW in my opinion, showing the difficulties of the cultivation path like no one does. Starts slow but you have to endure and give it a try, believe me than you are not going to regret it.
We can find a well developed MC with almost no plot armor what enjoy success and endure defeat in a mature way.
The only problem of this novel was the incredible slow release speed but I was solved some months ago and with 14 character per week this is an absolute must what every fan of xianxia novels should read and enjoy.
這是我心目中最好的一部小說,展現(xiàn)了修行之路的艱辛,無人能及。開始很慢,但你必須忍受并嘗試一下,相信我,你不會后悔的。
我們可以看到一個成熟的主角,幾乎沒有任何主角光環(huán),以一種成熟的方式享受成功和忍受失敗。
這部小說唯一的問題就是更新速度太慢了,但我?guī)讉€月前就解決了,每周14個章節(jié),這絕對是每一個仙俠小說愛好者都應(yīng)該閱讀和享受的東西。
For those who seek a classic cultivation novel. This one is the best.
The main character is the most humble that i had seen. The world is well constructed and also the novel has a bit of romance but without the harem and rape shit that have in some chinese novels. Also, the novel is kind of enjoyable to read. One downpoint is that it focus too much in cultivation (which is normal for a cultivantion novel) but also focus a lot in magical weapons. It has slow start, and a lot of secundary characters. But still, is one of my top 3 xianxia novels.
對于那些追求經(jīng)典修行小說的人。這個是最好的。
主角是我見過的最謙遜的。這個世界是建構(gòu)得很好的,小說也有點浪漫,還沒有一些中國小說中的后宮和強奸。而且,這部小說讀起來也挺有意思的。一個缺點是它太專注于修行(這對于修行小說來說是很正常的),同時也非常關(guān)注法寶。它很慢熱,而且有很多次要人物。但是,仍然是我最愛的三大仙俠小說之一。
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This is without a doubt, the best cultivation novel on the website.
It still has the premise of someone finding an OP item but the MC is intelligent, ruthless and does not rely on the item like a crutch. Fascinating world building and feels like a full story that doesn't just repeat itself.
This feels like an accurate story of how a random person with no real talent can climb a mountain of corpses to stand at the top of his world.
It is well translated and having over a thousand chapters already released to binge should hopefully convince people to read it.
毫無疑問,這是這個網(wǎng)站上最好的修行小說。
前提仍然是某個人找到了一個異寶,不過主角很聰明,冷酷,沒有像依靠拐杖一樣依靠這個寶物。奇幻世界構(gòu)建得好像一個真實發(fā)生的故事,而不是自我的重復(fù)。
這就像是一個真實的故事,講述了一個沒有真正天賦的普通人如何爬上尸山,站在世界之巔的故事。
這本書翻譯得很好,已經(jīng)發(fā)行了一千多章,希望能說服人們?nèi)ラ喿x它。
If you want someone who soars through the heavens in one step, then you won't enjoy this.
Han Li does get his crutch like any other MC, but his struggle for immortality lasts much longer than others. Although this might be frustrating for readers who see the MC gain very little and lose as much, it can also be just as refreshing.
He has no talent, and fights rely on the treasures rather than the skill in most aspects. Han Li realizes this, and treats every fight with caution rather than jumping into action without any preparation.
Some arcs do tend drag on a bit too long, but it's also expected when he can't use heavenbreaking items and skills. If you have the patience, I highly recommend it for you…
如果你想要一個一步登天的人,那你就不會喜歡這個。
韓立確實像其他主人公一樣得到了金手指,但他為永生而奮斗的時間卻比其他人長得多。雖然這可能會讓那些看到主人公收益微乎其微而損失慘重的讀者感到沮喪,但它同樣可以讓人耳目一新。
他沒有天分,打斗大多靠的是寶物而不是法術(shù)。韓立意識到了這一點,對待每一場戰(zhàn)斗都很謹慎,而不是毫無準備就行動起來。
有些線確實拖得太久了,也很期待他不能使用玄天靈寶和法術(shù)時的樣子。如果你有耐心,我向你強烈推薦它…
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Probably the best novel in WW at the time I wrote this review. This not even a boastful claim since there's just so many novels in this website alone that stole a troupe, plotline, character sheet, etc etc from RMJI.
If you like, who likes a smart, calm MC with a good badass personality that you could root for, this is it. Look no further. He's a very well written character in a very well written novel.
To add to the fact, that there's not a lot of plot hole, or deus exmachina plot armor in the novel that would let you enjoy the novel without losing any brain cell, RMJI also made you wanting for more chapters because of the good fighting scene and three dimensional characters that would be the gold standard of Chinese WN.
可能是我寫這篇評論時武俠世界上最好的小說。這甚至不是一個吹噓的說法,因為僅僅在這個網(wǎng)站上就有這么多小說偷走了凡人修仙傳的設(shè)定、情節(jié)、人物簡介等等。
如果你喜歡,一個聰明冷靜的主角,有著一個你可以支持的,亦正亦邪的性格,那就是他了??纯催@本書吧。在一部寫得很好的小說中,他是一個寫得很好的人物。
更重要的是,小說中沒有太多的情節(jié)漏洞,也沒有讓你在不損失任何腦細胞的情況下欣賞小說的逆天的主角光環(huán)。因為良好的戰(zhàn)斗的場面和立體的人物,凡人修仙傳會讓你想要看更多的章節(jié),這將是中國仙俠小說的黃金標準。
This is a top 5 novel of mine.
This novel isn't for the person who wants young masters, constant face slapping, and failures to recognize mount Tai.
Han Li is the forgotten side character of most novels who's intelligent but knows his talent is trash. And it stays that way for the entire ride. He knows when to throw his weight around and when to pull back, and he knows how to keep himself alive. For all intents and purposes, he's one of the truly smart MCs.
He recognizes that he can't deal with every problem, and sometimes the best thing to do is just hide! Hide and cultivate, and let someone else deal with this problem! I don't know of a single other novel where powerful antagonists that are introduced…
這是我最愛的五大小說之一。
這部小說不適合那些想要小少爺,不停地打臉,和有眼不識泰山的人。
韓立是大多數(shù)小說中會被遺忘的一個配角,他很聰明,但知道自己的天分是垃圾。整個旅程都是這樣。他知道什么時候該放手,什么時候該后退,他知道如何讓自己活下去。不管怎么說,他是一個真正聰明的主角。
他認識到他不能處理所有的問題,有時最好的辦法就是躲起來!躲起來修煉,讓別人來處理這個問題吧!我不知道還有哪部小說的對手有這么強。
One of the best cultivation novels, it respects its title. This novel is really about the struggle of an ordinary, untalented youth, who later on ages, to cultivate in standard (not too good, not too bad) cultivation world.
Him succeeding and increasing his power is not due to talent, but due to (moderately ) hard work, (weak and later mildly strong ) treasures, thinking and taking advantage of situations, and definitely not plot armor(most of the story).
Even though it's slow, it deserves being read, seeing the world from the perspective of a struggling person without massive power-ups is a good experience.
Side characters are not overlooked, despite not being that important, and it's a bit sad seeing the aging of MC's family, and him wandering whether or not to sever his ties.
最好的修行小說之一,它尊重它的名字。這部小說真實地講述了一個普通人的奮斗,一個沒有天賦的年輕人,在今后的歲月里,在一個標準的修仙世界(不太好,也不太壞)里修行。
他成功并增強自己的力量不是因為天賦,而是因為(適度)努力工作,(弱小后來稍強的)法寶,思考和利用情況,絕對不是主角光環(huán)(大部分故事中的)。
盡管它很慢,但值得一讀,從一個沒有大量提升資源的奮斗者的角度看世界是一個很好的體驗。
配角也不被忽視,盡管不是那么重要,但看到主角家人的衰老,以及他猶豫是否要斷絕關(guān)系,讓人有點難過。
This novel has something that other novel didn't bother to do and that is build up. And that is nice to read compared to other xianxia novel out there. Thr down side is or something that i would love to see more is some kindness or compasion although this novel has some but i think it could do with a little more, or maybe some companionship because it could be a little boring if all we could see is han li. And it would be nice to see other character journey to immortality like han li so therr is some camparision towards the main character.
But overall one of the best xianxia novel and personally my favorite.
這部小說有一些其他小說不愿意做的事情,就是人物成長。和這里的其他仙俠小說比較起來,讀的很舒服。缺點或是我想更多看到的一些善意和同情,即使小說里已經(jīng)有一些了,但是我覺得可以更多,或者是一些陪伴。因為一直看韓立有一點無聊??吹狡渌巧拈L生之旅會很好,這樣就與主角有了一些比較。
不管怎么說這都是最好的仙俠小說之一,也是我最喜歡的。
If you want to know why I like this novel, just read the other reviews.
I put RMJI on the same level as Overgeared, one chinese and one korean, one about martial cultivation and the other about a game, but both masterpieces.
The author will not forget anything in the story : Han Li find a treasure but can't use it ? Even if you forget it after 200 chapters, the author won't. There is a clear goal, and almost nothing is left to the author's egoistic wishes because everything is planned, the MC isn't some guy who got all of the world's luck, it really is a cultivator's life, more realistic than any other cultivation novel, a refreshing change…
如果你想知道我為什么喜歡這本小說,讀一讀其他的評論就好了。
我認為《凡人修仙傳》是和《Overgeared》一個水平的。一個是中國的,一個是韓國的,一個是資源修仙,一個是游戲,但都是杰作。
作者沒有忘記故事中的任何東西:韓立找到了一件寶物但是沒用?即使在200章之后你忘了,作者也不會。小說的目標非常明確,沒有什么作者的私貨,一切都是計劃好的,主角并不是獲得了整個世界的運氣的人,它真的是修仙的生活,比其他的修仙小說更真實,一個令人耳目一新的變化。
There are two novels on this site that are absolute must reads and this is one of them. It’s very refreshing. I often reread this novel from the beginning. It will absolutely be a purchase once it’s complete. If you enjoy the genre you’ll enjoy definitely RMJI and will recognize it to be a star of the genre.
This novel dismisses or makes very very little use of common MC tropes within the genre. It’s not a harem novel. The MC (Protagonist) really focuses on his cultivation, is intelligent and doesn’t “break character” for sake of plot twist. You feel the pacing is just right, even has proper use of time skips.
這是這個網(wǎng)站上必讀的兩部小說之一。令人耳目一新。我經(jīng)常從頭重讀這部小說。這本小說一旦完本必然購入。如果你喜歡這個流派,你一定會喜歡凡人修仙傳,并意識到這是這個流派的明珠。
這本小說摒棄或是使用了很少很少的這類小說中普通主角的設(shè)定。這也不是一本后宮小說。主角真的是非常專注于修行,很聰明,沒有因為情節(jié)扭轉(zhuǎn)的原因破壞人設(shè)。你會感覺節(jié)奏恰到好處,甚至有一些合理的時間跳躍。
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Easily one of the best novels. Read it. Now
No words can describe it. If you're deliberating, read any negative reviews, or are unsure -- then listen to a friendly fellow daoist, and pick up this novel.
I won't even attempt to describe the novel, because it's impossible to do it justice. All I can do is try and stress the sheer epicness of RMJI.
If you're here, reading this, you have either read other novels before, or you are new and somehow wound up in this rabbit hole - but regardless, this novel is a must read.
I promise you won't regret this read. If I lie, may my dao heart collapse and my body be struck by heavenly tribulation!
絕對是最好的小說之一?,F(xiàn)在就讀一讀吧。
沒有語言可以描述這本小說。如果你在猶豫,讀到了一些負面評論,或是不確定——那么就聽一聽一位友好的道士的話,拿起這本小說。
我不會試著去描述這部小說,因為不可能做到公正。我唯一可以做的就是強調(diào)凡人修仙傳純粹的史詩性。
如果你在看這個評論,你要么是之前讀過一些小說,或是新來的,反正你會陷到這個坑里。但是不管怎樣,這本小說是必須要讀的。
我向你保證你不會后悔閱讀的。如果我撒謊了,就讓我道心崩潰,天劫毀身。
This by far my the best novel I've read.
Han Li starts out as a the 4th son of a farmer and ends up getting the chance to become an immortal. In his early development, he struggles to without a mentor. Later in the story, he'll temporarily put aside his differences with some of his enemies to achieve his goals. Like most novels he makes friends and enemies. Althoigh he becomes acquainted with many women, only one of them becomes his Dao companion. So this is not your typical harem styled story. The story does a great job at time progression. Not like other stories where the MC goes from weak to strong/unstoppable in flash (20 years). I highly recommend this story.
這是我讀過的最好的小說。
韓立從一個農(nóng)民的第四個兒子開始,最后有機會成為一個永生的人。在他早期的成長過程中,沒有導(dǎo)師,他掙扎著。在故事的后面,他會暫時擱置與一些敵人的分歧,以達到他的目標。像大多數(shù)小說一樣,他結(jié)交朋友和敵人。雖然他認識了很多女人,但其中只有一個成為他的道侶。所以這不是典型的后宮式小說。這本小說在時間上做得很好。不像其他小說中的主角從弱到強/不可阻擋(20年)。我強烈推薦這本小說。
One of the best cultivation novels i have read, although i am only up to chapter 1354.
One of the best things about this novel is that his ''cheat'' does not directly effect his cultivation or combat ability, it is more a supplement. This means the MC must work for every advance, and no he is not that talented.
Another point I like about this novel is the lack of an obvious pattern. the MC, like in most cultivation novels does train, go on adventures, encounter battles and craft things. However there is no set pattern. The only pattern i have seen so far is that each major struggle tends to break the MC's treasures. This means he must repair them or earn new ones. This is a welcome change from novels where the MC learns a new super awesome move or power and then slowly, or immediately, no longer uses the old ones for no reason…
我讀過的最好的修行小說之一,盡管我只讀到了1354章。
這部小說最好的一點是他的“金手指”并沒有直接影響他的修行和戰(zhàn)斗能力,它更多的是一種補充。這意味著主角必須為每一個進步而努力,但他不是那么有才華。
我喜歡這部小說的另一點是缺乏明顯的模式。像大多數(shù)修行小說一樣,主角也會訓(xùn)練、冒險、遭遇戰(zhàn)斗和煉器。但是沒有固定的模式。到目前為止,我所看到的唯一模式是,每一次重大戰(zhàn)斗都有可能破壞主角的寶物。這就意味著他必須修理它們或是掙新的。一個可喜的變化就是,在小說中主角學(xué)會了一個新的超級令人敬畏的動作或力量,然后慢慢地,或立即,不再無緣無故地使用舊的…
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A little slow at times but still a good read. Could be extremely boring to some people since the MC is not reckless nor hot-headed; he won’t be fighting people left and right and there is barely any face-slapping.
A good thing I have found in this novels is that the difficulty in breakthrough realm is actually hard. Unlike other novels where the author will say that it is near impossible for the MC to advance then have he advance in 1 instance, this MC actually needs multiple attempts to succeed and that is with a lot of pills. Simply put, MC’s advancement is much more reasonable and realistic compared to other MC
有時有點慢,但讀起來還是不錯的。對某些人來說可能是非常無聊的,因為主角既不魯莽也不頭腦發(fā)熱;他不會從左到右的打人,而且?guī)缀鯖]有打臉情節(jié)。
我在這部小說中發(fā)現(xiàn)的一件好事是,突破境界的難度其實很難。與其他小說不同的是,作者會說主角幾乎不可能在一次嘗試中突破,這個多次實際上需要多次嘗試才能成功,這需要大量的藥丸。簡單地說,與其他小說主角相比,本書主角的進步更為合理和現(xiàn)實。
One of the best novels in WW. It is written in a very planned and structured way. MC's personality stays consistent throughout the novel and most actions of MC are backed with logic, his personality and his experiences.
While MC manages to become one of the youngest people to have certain accomplishments, the timeline and general progression of story is still much better than most of the other novels and is justified by reasons and circumstances.
Development of supporting characters is a bit lacking but I find that true for most of wuxia novels I have read except for some written by Tang Jia San Shao. Despite that, the the characters that are introduced stay true to their background and their actions are never arbitrary.
武俠世界上最好的小說之一。它是以一種非常有計劃的和結(jié)構(gòu)化的方式編寫的。主角的個性在小說中始終保持著一致性,主人公的大多數(shù)行為都有其邏輯、性格和經(jīng)驗的支持。
雖然主角成功地成為了最年輕的有一定成就的人之一,但時間軸和故事的總體進展仍然比其他大多數(shù)小說好得多,并且有理由和環(huán)境來證明。
配角的發(fā)展有點欠缺,但我發(fā)現(xiàn)除了唐家三少的一些武俠小說外,我讀過的大部分武俠小說都是這樣。盡管如此,被介紹的角色仍然忠于他們的背景,他們的行為從來都不是武斷的。
Suuder
True gem of a novel. Appreciate all the reviewers who recommended this. It is a full on exciting adventure novel.
Interesting characters, well developed universe, creative and detailed cultivation system and methods, but best of all is a pragmatic MC and host of interesting thinking side characters.
Thought process that went into developing this novel is a real effort. It will make you think that some of your past novels that you read on WW were subpar at best. Before this, Er Gen novels were my favorite find on WW but RMJI takes it to new level and contains aspects that are better in some areas.
真正的小說瑰寶。感謝所有推薦這個的評論者。這是一部充滿刺激的冒險小說。
有趣的人物,發(fā)達的世界,創(chuàng)造性的和詳細的修行體系和方法,但最重要的是一個務(wù)實的主角和有著有趣想法的配角舉行的集會。
進入小說的思考過程需要一些努力。這會讓你覺得你以前在武俠世界上讀過的一些小說充其量也不怎么樣。在此之前,二代小說是我在武俠世界上找到的最喜歡的小說,但凡人修仙傳將它提升到了一個新的層次,包含了一些在某些領(lǐng)域更好的方面。